Saturday, June 30, 2007

Casus belli --- the Cause of the War

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"be yourself imitation is SUICIDE"


Y waste time on imitating!
wen there so much new and
exciting to do!
Y fake others
when u can be proud YOU!
Y creep into someone else's skin
Wen it could be more terrifying than u can even think!
Y not discover
the truth inside YOU!
Than to commit suicide
by imitating a fool u never knew!




A small lines i wrote few days back in someones scrapbook.......don't know if they can pass of as poem but.... who gives a damn till Friends like you go through it and give me feedback........hey friend thanx for the title

Reviews:
many Friends asked why the Heading "Casus belli" is called so because "its all about internal war........

9 comments:

shivamgoel said...

interesting poem..bt dint really get how does ur title make sense///

ANUPAMA said...

good try!!!!!

SHABAAS!!!!!!!!

pratima rana said...

Short and sweet poem

very nice!

Mayank said...

Just staters stuff.... but nice one ..... and i'll show u my didi's poem as well, she write good poems.

prerna said...

hey tat waz a gud start..keep it up u'll be a great poet one day....hahhahahaha...

Neelabh said...

Keates or Byron?

Garima said...

though i hv gvn u the comments...but then as u insisted fr the documented feedbk,,,,here u go :p

i liked the idea of the poem...though it can b edited a bit (being a Content Editer that cudnt go un-noticed)...a good poem indeed fr a starter...

swati said...

hmmm... nice n intereting short poem...
but how true...
ppl waste soooooooo much tym tryin to imitate others....

Smita said...

I liked it as I could make some sense out of it. Very Good.

Keep it up. Looking forward to some more meaningful stuff.

Ravindra Vikram Singh रवींद्र विक्रम सिंह ரவீந்திர விக்ரம் சிங் રવીન્દ્ર વિક્રમ સિંહ రవీంద్ర విక్రమ్ సింగ్ রবীন্দ্র বিক্রম সিং ರವೀಂದ್ರ ವಿಕ್ರಮ್ ಸಿಂಗ್