Thursday, August 16, 2007

Dont know if this gets to & in : YOU

A poem for someone whom I never told;
written for you, even if you are lost!
Just to wake you up;
That let n number of persons be your friend!
But never let this one out of your head;
You may look good or not!
they care, I do not;
You can say I am too Odd!
But I will be always the one to count on;
You may curse, you may cry for this!
but one never realises till the person is gone;
Don't Think, don't get Angry!
Just KILL ME if I AM WRONG.

----- WORDs AND WORDs ARE NOT ALL THE THINGS I HAVE !! WINK !!! -----

13 comments:

shuchi said...

hmmm,well i must say a nice poem...

IEOR said...

dude.......on whom u have written such a nice poem hhhuu...

Garima said...

well....first and foremost Thank you fr following the feedback....it looked much neat

good one....can be converted into a rap song...if u know any musician ;)

Garima said...

and yeah....I am still wondering....whoz that (lucky) gurl??

Anu said...

gud!!!!

Keep up the gud work!

stop putting on ur jabda and beerrraaiinn!!!!!!!!!!!

prerna said...

Hey....
this poem reminds me of one of ma favourite songs "WORDS" n yaa waz kiddin i know that itz not copied...hahahah...But really waz a rocking poem....

little said...

nice one ravi,
tere dimag me ye sab aata kaha se hai..
really wonderful..
keep it up..........

gayatri said...

hmmm..for whoever ths poem is..dat person is surely gonna be very lucky...

Jennifer said...

Pretty cool stuff you write; I especially like the poem with the three words. Amazing how much meaning you can express with three little words, but three very powerful words. I guess the key is to choose the "right" words. Keep it up.

Thanks for visiting my blog the other day.

Anu said...

Kaun hai woh ladki??
Rehti hai woh kahan??

Mindblowing!!
Shabaash!! Mera naam roshan kiya bachhe!!

Neelabh said...

I can see a rebel..

good thoughts

swati said...

wow....
dats really gr8...
was not aware u r soooooooo creative...
i m not so fond of poems n stuff like dat...
but m gald i read it...
its reallllyyy nice...

keep up the gud work... :-)

sonal said...

wow... I would love to know d inspiration behind!!

Ravindra Vikram Singh रवींद्र विक्रम सिंह ரவீந்திர விக்ரம் சிங் રવીન્દ્ર વિક્રમ સિંહ రవీంద్ర విక్రమ్ సింగ్ রবীন্দ্র বিক্রম সিং ರವೀಂದ್ರ ವಿಕ್ರಮ್ ಸಿಂಗ್