Saturday, September 29, 2007

Were You there?????.....nope...you are.........

What can you do,
When you lose Something You never Had;
Whom can you curse,
When you dont even believe in that damn god;
What can you do of pain,
When you know the cure but....;
As You know things would never be Same,
Even if the world change.........

6 comments:

Anu said...

inspired by ???????
WHO???????

Good one!!

prerna said...

I hope this is not true because if it is then u missed out on someone who is obviously quite special. This is a beautifully written piece describing lost..... If this poem could dance it would be dancing to the rhythm of the words right now.
This is so original. Short, with a definite message.

Garima said...

"As You know things would never be Same,
Even if the world change........."

hmmmm....poem is GOOD....you are improving man...day by day...this reflects in each of your new poem...
somehow i think this line would be more appropriate as
"As You know things would never be Same,
Even if this world remains unchaged...."

pratima said...

hmmmm nice poem
beautifully written
vaise kaunse vali ke liye likha hai

Neelabh said...

As Iron Maiden has said.. "Nothing can you contemplate would ever be same.. every second is a new spark, sets you afflame"

Cheers

swati said...

No matter how busy you are, you must take time to make the other person feel important and also u deserve it...
u r a gem...
Appreciative words are the most powerful force for good on earth!
Sorry for being late...in praising ur poems...

Ravindra Vikram Singh रवींद्र विक्रम सिंह ரவீந்திர விக்ரம் சிங் રવીન્દ્ર વિક્રમ સિંહ రవీంద్ర విక్రమ్ సింగ్ রবীন্দ্র বিক্রম সিং ರವೀಂದ್ರ ವಿಕ್ರಮ್ ಸಿಂಗ್