Monday, December 10, 2007

but am waiting.....

i got some roses,
wrote some proses;
roses have withered,
proses are dead;

but still am waiting,
and the fone isnt ringing;
mistakes am thinking,
deserted am roaming;

hopes are dieing,
death isnt coming;
am not chasing,
but am waiting.....

10 comments:

Smita said...

oye, pathetic stuff....

You are not a pessimist I thought

You know what... this poem of yours can actually lead a person reading it to deep slumbers.

Pls dont do this to others. Be Optimistic :-))

nishu said...

dont wait let the other one come in, uski photo ke tukre tukre kar aur flush kar de, wait karega to wit hi karta rehjaega,
Ab serious comment: Nice poem,keep it up.

nishu said...

abey ek spell mistake hai vo "wit" nahi "wait" hai.

Garima said...

nice poem...but dont let yourself go down like this...when in 'love' a person should reach the unreachable heights and not the otherwise,,,,wait..but for someone who would make you reach the sky...

keep writing the good stuff...the standard has gone up this time...stick to it..
and one more thing...it should be 'phone' and not 'fone'....samjha???

di said...

u know bro ur poem was really giving the feel of depression u r going thru rite now.
"aur bhi gam hain zamane mein mohabbat ke siwa"so better overcome this....
but i liked ur poem

Shivangi said...
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Supriya said...

Hmmm... Mere Bimaar Shanu,
I thought sm1 strngly belived in d saying "LIFE MOVES ON"...
Ne ways dnt worry maine tere 101 n 51 RED ROSES sambhal ke apne wrk station pe rakhe hain @--;-

Supriya said...

Hmmm... Mere Bimaar Shanu,
I thought sm1 strngly belived in d saying "LIFE MOVES ON"...
Ne ways dnt worry maine tere 101 n 51 RED ROSES sambhal ke apne wrk station pe rakhe hain @--;-

rolly said...

Hiiiiii

kasturi said...

dats really gud...
was not aware u r so creative...
i m not so fond of poems bt i like dat...
but m gald i read it...
its reallllyyy nice...

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